I really liked how you addressed the problem by painting a clear picture about what was going on. However, I would have liked to hear a little more about what you plan to offer and the details of that in a more passionate way. I did really like how you added a question at the end for the audience as a way to interact with those listening to the pitch.
Bradley, You seemed well prepared for this elevator pitch, and it seemed like something you could really do. I liked your eye contact and professional dress for the pitch. I think you could do a little better job pitching it in telling investors why it is such a great opportunity, something that they just can’t afford to miss out on.
I really liked how you addressed the problem by painting a clear picture about what was going on. However, I would have liked to hear a little more about what you plan to offer and the details of that in a more passionate way. I did really like how you added a question at the end for the audience as a way to interact with those listening to the pitch.
ReplyDeleteBradley,
ReplyDeleteYou seemed well prepared for this elevator pitch, and it seemed like something you could really do. I liked your eye contact and professional dress for the pitch. I think you could do a little better job pitching it in telling investors why it is such a great opportunity, something that they just can’t afford to miss out on.